I notice a majority of your songs seem louder in the second half, which is immediately visible from their waveform, and even without looking at that, it makes music by the The-Cupbearer predictable. I expect more layers of sound to gradually appear, and they appear.

This is a personal preference, but a repetitive pattern that's in the foreground and easily discernible doesn't sit right with me. In this case, the strings. I like "Surrendering to the Embrace of the Living Stone" much better because it lacks proper instrumentation.

As your tags suggest, indeed there is a lot of reverb, enough that the drums, especially the drum breaks, struggle to pop up. I can hear them just fine, but it's like they're not truly at the forefront and since you made breakcore, I assume the drums were the focus. Before the 30 second mark, there is too much reverb on the drums, which, yeah, is the production style, but is counterintuitive with a dense arrangement. Would've been better if they were just quieter, but with normal amount of echo. Also, the drop at 1:44 seems random, because it's very short and there aren't others in the song.

6 minutes is far too long as there isn't a lot going on. I can hear only a single melody and two beats looping forever, and while there are other background sounds, it takes very long for anything to change. The bridge at 3:19 sounds so empty, again showing there is little going on.